Post by mathewwite on Jun 23, 2009 17:34:13 GMT -5
A three part story I'm writing (or I have been writing) That takes place far in the future, but the technology is in medieval times. The reason why this is, is explained in the second book, but I haven't gotten that far in the second book's writing yet. I started the story in the seventh grade, and I don't want to change what I first wrote, so there will be misspells and the like. I kinda feel shy about sharing this because I think it may sound a bit corny, but go easy on me okay?
The first book is only 13 handwritten pages and about 8 pretty short chapters.
Book One: Mathew Wite's Training
Chapter One: Prophecy
I am the foreteller. I read prophecies from ancient texts and foretell what will happen soon. The next prophecy is about the legendary blue coral items. The legend is that there is two users of the blue coral items. One is good, the other, pure evil. If evil prevails, all in the land shall perish. If good prevails, unlawfullness will never succeed. Let us hope that evil does not prevail.
Chapter Two: Kobo Temple
The Kobo Temple has trained many people. Some of the best magicians came from there. They learned all the basics in life, math, reading, and writing. In the first years of training they learn these skills. They usually master them by age nine. But not a special boy named Mathew Wite. He mastered these skills by age six. Only the master of the temple knew Mathew Wite's father was a god. The foreteller had told themaster about the prophecy. The master of the temple's name is Karat. Karat believed that Mathew Wite was one of the chosen ones of the blue coral items. He also believed another weilder was Malfu. Malfu's father was a demon, but Malfu looked perfectly human. The reason why Karat believed Malfu was another weilder of the items was that he passed the class of basics at the age of seven. But Malfu was only one year older than Mathew Wite.
Mathew Wite is half elf. He is very kind and gentle when it comes to nature. He loved almost any kind of animal. He didn't like animals that attacked him for no reason.
Malfu has a very evil and short temper. He didn't care much about animals. He was mostly interested in the dark arts. Sometimes he would punish those who would call him names. He had special powers and could through them aside like dolls.
End of Chapter Two.
Tell me wht you think. Please enjoy the story. I'll add the rest of the chapters later on.
The first book is only 13 handwritten pages and about 8 pretty short chapters.
Book One: Mathew Wite's Training
Chapter One: Prophecy
I am the foreteller. I read prophecies from ancient texts and foretell what will happen soon. The next prophecy is about the legendary blue coral items. The legend is that there is two users of the blue coral items. One is good, the other, pure evil. If evil prevails, all in the land shall perish. If good prevails, unlawfullness will never succeed. Let us hope that evil does not prevail.
Chapter Two: Kobo Temple
The Kobo Temple has trained many people. Some of the best magicians came from there. They learned all the basics in life, math, reading, and writing. In the first years of training they learn these skills. They usually master them by age nine. But not a special boy named Mathew Wite. He mastered these skills by age six. Only the master of the temple knew Mathew Wite's father was a god. The foreteller had told themaster about the prophecy. The master of the temple's name is Karat. Karat believed that Mathew Wite was one of the chosen ones of the blue coral items. He also believed another weilder was Malfu. Malfu's father was a demon, but Malfu looked perfectly human. The reason why Karat believed Malfu was another weilder of the items was that he passed the class of basics at the age of seven. But Malfu was only one year older than Mathew Wite.
Mathew Wite is half elf. He is very kind and gentle when it comes to nature. He loved almost any kind of animal. He didn't like animals that attacked him for no reason.
Malfu has a very evil and short temper. He didn't care much about animals. He was mostly interested in the dark arts. Sometimes he would punish those who would call him names. He had special powers and could through them aside like dolls.
End of Chapter Two.
Tell me wht you think. Please enjoy the story. I'll add the rest of the chapters later on.